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Aslade lineart by JessicaElwood Aslade lineart by JessicaElwood
Lineart of a commission.

Finally I am catching up with what I owe now my room is back to normal! Thank you everyone for your patience!
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Critique by XanthePhoenix Jun 10, 2010, 8:15:15 PM
great lines! plus i LOVE the very "active" pose. like she is IN action, rather than just ready to spring into it. I like it! as far as the pose goes, it seems a different direction from what you normally do. so cudos.

as for the rest of the picture, like i said, great lines. however i did notice a thing or two that looked a little off. the first thing is the back foot. I realize that it is meant to look as if she is up on the pad of her foot, but it seems, from one glance to the next, that she is up on the pad of her foot and in the next moment that she has rolled an ankle. i don't know, maybe it will come in to better focus when there is a background for her to stand on! lol! the only other thing that looks slightly off, and i can believe that i am saying this, is her breasts. they seem... hmmm... what's the best word for it... slightly too elongated i guess is the best way to describe it. I mean, they still look GREAT! lol, but slightly elongated.

other than those two things the line art looks flawless! another awesome piece by the talented miss Elwood!
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Looks really great, but since you ask for a critique, there you have it!! hehe!!

I agree with XanthePhoenix about the feet. I find both of them a bit "off perspective", especially the right one, that looks too flat, when the character is full of volume and perspective.
I find that the hands did not grab the axe with enough strengh, but I am the worst "hand artist" ever, so I can't you explain why and how to correct it, and my english level is not too good to explain this kind of technical things... I hope that you understand what I say!!!
At last, and beeing too fussy, to me tha tail will work better over the leg, and not behind, to enhance perspective, but is a silly detail.
Anyway, the work is as good as the other you do. I specially love the face an te curves of the booty. So, congrats!!!!
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:iconafrodisium:
Afrodisium Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
Nice musculature on the arms. :nod: Can't wait to see the color version of this. :)
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:iconbaedin:
Baedin Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
Beautiful work as always!!!!
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:iconwiox:
Wiox Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010  Student Artist
are you going to colour it to?
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:iconstarcentury:
StarCentury Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010
Ooooo nice! She looks so strong wielding that huge axe of hers, yet still manages to look very attractive, even if it's just a lineart. :D Speaking of which, I love how you accentuated the boldness of merged lines to give it a neat, shadow-like effect. This can look pretty sick in color! :+favlove:
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:iconnogistune:
Nogistune Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice...
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:iconmehulk:
mehulk Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
i like it. detail is very good. i have seen good artwork before and this is really good. a little background like a rough one would be nice to give an idea of why she is standing like that. otherwise the ankle looks twisted or something. all in all very good
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Kabal-monk Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010
Yay for fixed room ^^ looking forward to seeing more progress!
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Dragonstar1278 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010
I missed your other art! so beautiful in many ways!
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:iconlead-base:
Lead-Base Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
that is bad ass barbaricness!!
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:iconalrunasxhot4u:
ALRUNASXHOT4U Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010   General Artist
Man, If I looked that good. Hot damn, Shes redy for a brawl. =D
Great pic. 2:thumbsup:
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:iconspacezillazon:
spacezillazon Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Great look,colors,Details! Super hot & sexy girl,I like her a lot,I'd be with her a lot
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:iconchalodillo:
ChaloDillo Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Action pose!
Very nice work love. Really a great amount of details here!
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:iconcoleslayer:
Coleslayer Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010
Very nice. And very different from the stuff you usually make miss Elwood.
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:iconcdmalcolm:
cdmalcolm Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
:spyed::iconninjaseal:
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:iconyagamijase1800:
YagamiJase1800 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010
Cool. Are her ears poking through her helmet?
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:iconsiborg626:
siborg626 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010
Wolf or fox-Type Furry woman either one, she's got a Perfect Perfect type of Figure!!!!!!!!
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:icontenshi-shoujo:
Tenshi-Shoujo Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! Superb lineart! :clap::clap::clap:
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:iconrah-chan:
Rah-Chan Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
With what and how do you ink your lineart? Is it always done digitally? Do you ever use the pen tool in photoshop? Just a couple questions I had been wondering.
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:iconcarnage1809:
CARNAGE1809 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010
Great pose
Great picture
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:iconcomma-kazie:
Comma-Kazie Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010
Looking good, Jess!
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:icondevianttx:
DeviantTX Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010
sweet
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:iconmrnorboto:
MrNorboto Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010
AH! Even your sketches are amazing!! ^_^
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:iconsariafan:
Sariafan Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010
Very well done as always:D
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:iconstolen-dreamer:
Stolen-Dreamer Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was just wondering, can we colour this if we link back to you?
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:iconphantomhourglass:
PhantomHourglass Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010
kick@$$ character.
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:iconseiichisin:
SeiichiSin Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Woot! Congrats on everything being back to (semi)normal! And congrats on the first post of the art. I think, or did I miss something?
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:iconelrohiralcarin:
ElrohirAlcarin Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
exelent work ^.^
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:iconvekinntiynn:
vekinntiynn Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
Pretty awsome and I love the detail put into the weapons.
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chordorama Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
Wow I guess all this time with that remodeling your artistic talent was all bottled up and now its unleashed! Its great although I agree with the foot thing but not with the breasts being too elongated. :) Really great stuff!
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:iconwolfsaint:
WolfSaint Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
Looks like its full of potential!
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:iconwarhound-cmp:
Warhound-CMP Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
Good dynamics and pose! Much more interesting visually than some of your past works ^ ^
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:iconleondarkstar:
Leondarkstar Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Man, I'm always so jealous of crisp line-art. Do you do it all by hand?
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:iconaplos:
Aplos Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
great! will you color it?
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:icondereck-lunar:
Dereck-Lunar Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
*In front of Aslade* EEK! Get down!*squats*
"Woosh"
lol
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sigel4ever Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Student General Artist
super great
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:iconmoryjp:
MoryJP Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Nice! ^^
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:iconmad-geo:
Mad-Geo Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Nice work.
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:iconjacksonjart:
jacksonjart Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Professional General Artist
I'm a black n white artist so I like it already and it has a very anatomically correct body...muscular arms in my opinion is a plus and the weapon is strong and I like that. The head is great but is it a bit too small??? I don't know it goes with the lower torso section but I dunno like I said I don't draw women so well so I need more opinions with my own :)

Overall very nice :)
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AngeluzDKraten Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
a grat job as always ^^
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:iconthefsd:
TheFSD Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Big honkin' axe, battle helm, hide boots, spare dagger (just in case), AND boobs?!?! It's a table-top RPGer's wet dream!
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:iconscorpdk:
ScorpDK Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010   Digital Artist
yay, dawing time again, yes? :D
Can't wait for another batch of your lovely ladies :P
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:icondreamzaboutrenamon:
DreamzAboutRenamon Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Axe, evil look in her eyes...
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:iconanubisscales:
AnubisScales Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YAY art! I've missed your drawings.
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:iconpt018:
pt018 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist Filmographer
Nice work. Can't wait to see it colored in.
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:iconglezx:
glezx Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Student Digital Artist
:D
wow nice lineart
she looks busty, smexy, and strong ^^
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JHTriune Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Could I get permission to color this?
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Carlito2517 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Nice to see you back up and drawing again. This is a more dynamic pose than usual, and it looks good. Lines look really clean, wish I could do that and wonder how you do it. The one thing that seems a little off to me is that her waist seems a bit too small for her frame. Her arms and legs look muscular, and of course she's well-endowed, the midsection though just doesn't quite seem to fit her. But overall looks great, can't wait to see the colors.
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LionheartXIII Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Oh Crap shes got an Axe!!
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:iconlordcross:
lordcross Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
One dangerous beauty.
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:iconprototype66:
Prototype66 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Hot chick with an axe......
Life is goooood!
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