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Aslade lineart by JessicaElwood Aslade lineart by JessicaElwood
Lineart of a commission.

Finally I am catching up with what I owe now my room is back to normal! Thank you everyone for your patience!
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Critique by XanthePhoenix Jun 10, 2010, 8:15:15 PM
great lines! plus i LOVE the very "active" pose. like she is IN action, rather than just ready to spring into it. I like it! as far as the pose goes, it seems a different direction from what you normally do. so cudos.

as for the rest of the picture, like i said, great lines. however i did notice a thing or two that looked a little off. the first thing is the back foot. I realize that it is meant to look as if she is up on the pad of her foot, but it seems, from one glance to the next, that she is up on the pad of her foot and in the next moment that she has rolled an ankle. i don't know, maybe it will come in to better focus when there is a background for her to stand on! lol! the only other thing that looks slightly off, and i can believe that i am saying this, is her breasts. they seem... hmmm... what's the best word for it... slightly too elongated i guess is the best way to describe it. I mean, they still look GREAT! lol, but slightly elongated.

other than those two things the line art looks flawless! another awesome piece by the talented miss Elwood!
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Looks really great, but since you ask for a critique, there you have it!! hehe!!

I agree with XanthePhoenix about the feet. I find both of them a bit "off perspective", especially the right one, that looks too flat, when the character is full of volume and perspective.
I find that the hands did not grab the axe with enough strengh, but I am the worst "hand artist" ever, so I can't you explain why and how to correct it, and my english level is not too good to explain this kind of technical things... I hope that you understand what I say!!!
At last, and beeing too fussy, to me tha tail will work better over the leg, and not behind, to enhance perspective, but is a silly detail.
Anyway, the work is as good as the other you do. I specially love the face an te curves of the booty. So, congrats!!!!
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Afrodisium Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
Nice musculature on the arms. :nod: Can't wait to see the color version of this. :)
Baedin Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010
Beautiful work as always!!!!
Wiox Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2010  Student Artist
are you going to colour it to?
StarCentury Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010
Ooooo nice! She looks so strong wielding that huge axe of hers, yet still manages to look very attractive, even if it's just a lineart. :D Speaking of which, I love how you accentuated the boldness of merged lines to give it a neat, shadow-like effect. This can look pretty sick in color! :+favlove:
Nogistune Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
mehulk Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
i like it. detail is very good. i have seen good artwork before and this is really good. a little background like a rough one would be nice to give an idea of why she is standing like that. otherwise the ankle looks twisted or something. all in all very good
Kabal-monk Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2010
Yay for fixed room ^^ looking forward to seeing more progress!
Dragonstar1278 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2010
I missed your other art! so beautiful in many ways!
Lead-Base Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
that is bad ass barbaricness!!
ALRUNASXHOT4U Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2010   General Artist
Man, If I looked that good. Hot damn, Shes redy for a brawl. =D
Great pic. 2:thumbsup:
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